Smile by Raina Telgemeier

Comment · December 7, 2012

(NF2,3) the book smile is a really good book. this reminds me about why when chip my tooth and now i have to get braces. something similar happened to the main character in the book. she was coming from somewhere with here friend then when she was walking she trip and fell and she broke her tooth. so something similar happened to me too. so it is really fun to read a book that has the same experience like me so i can not wait to read on. also this book is going to be really good to read see you next errors.

Comment · March 14, 2012

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Comment · March 14, 2012

stephania D. ▶ Smile

(F4) The authors point of view is first person because the author use's I and me in this book. In this book the author use's attitude by for example,the author sighs when she is disappointed and smiles real big when she is very happy.The author use's language for attitude when for example, she screams no when the author does not want something.The author also says omg when she is exited.

Comment · February 24, 2012

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Comment · February 3, 2012

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Comment · January 24, 2012

bassira1234 ▶ Smile

2-) the book smile is a really good book. this reminds me about why when chip my tooth and now i have to get braces. something similar happened to the main character in the book. she was coming from somewhere with here friend then when she was walking she trip and fell and she broke her tooth. so something similar happened to me too. so it is really fun to read a book that has the same experience like me so i can not wait to read on. also this book is going to be really good to read see you next week.

Comment · January 9, 2012

Bassira, this note is well written, with the exception of a few minor grammatical errors. Be sure to check over your work before you click post next time, so you can earn all the points you really want. I like how you made a text to self connection, including when you chipped your own tooth. I assume that didn't feel very good. Maybe you could elaborate (expand) a bit on that, and help me better understand what you were feeling at the time. Also, tell us why it's funny to read about someone experiencing a similar pain as you, because that doesn't seem very pleasant at all.

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bassira1234 read 22 pages in Smile

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Comment · January 9, 2012

stephania D. read 46 pages in Smile

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Comment · December 29, 2011

Gregoria C. Mejia ▶ Smile

(IT9,10)The photographs/illustrations were important to the book or the words because the pictures showed how things went and she also told what happen and Raina drew a picture that matches the words.Another thing is that if the reader can't picture whats going on then the illustrations are right there so the reader can see what is going on. Raina Telgemeier did leave some unanswered questions. Did Raina have problems with her teeth after she stopped doing her treatment? Was it a good experience to have on braces? Is it really that painful when you had to go to the dentist and tighten your braces?

Comment · December 28, 2011

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